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All I Want
May 2, 2009
All I want is something amazing. Or someONE amazing.
All I want is someone that I can love, without that person being in my family.
All I want is someone that can hold me and I feel like nothing else is happening around us.
All I want is someone who I can run up to with tears streaming down my face and the first thing he says is "Alright, whose a** am I kicking?"
All I want is someone who I can't get enough of them and I want more.
All I want is someone who I love so much that, when we break the kiss, my heart hurts.
All I want is for my karma to grant me with Mr. Right. But what if that never happens? What if Mr. Right is off living somewhere with prince charming...?
© Heather H., Phoenix, AZ
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amyxu said...
on Jul. 2 2009 at 9:47 pm
Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and I came across your poem. I like the rhythm to it, it sounds so natural! One suggestion: in the phrase "someone who I can't get enough of them" it may work better to take out the "them." It's just a little distracting and redundant. Only a suggestion, though. Anyway, good job and keep writing!
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